When everyone when to another country or you immigrant there, sometime you get homesick or you want to go back to your own country that you have left. Mamacita is also one of them, she come from the country that speak Spanish. She can’t speak English she know very little English vocabulary. She old women so she would have a great memory of her own country so she misses her old country, old friend, old neighbor and etc, so she would like to go back. A big reason why people and Mamacita got home sick because they don’t adapt the culture and change if you when to other country and you not accept to change you got homesick.
Mamacita is an old woman so her life would spend on her old country there be lot of great memory there. So went she move to the new country she likes to look though old photograph and etc. she wouldn’t like to travel or go to anyplace. Then she slowly got homesick or maybe she is too fat like in the story said so she wouldn’t want to go anyway accept home.
The second reason why Mamacita homesick because her English is really not strong because she comes from Spanish speaking country. She know only eight English words like in story tells, so she would shy to speak to any people. And she is already old so it hard for her to learn language easily not as her son that can learn it very easily.
Last reason is she don’t accept to change her habit she don’t adapt to their country culture only little by little also can, but she not trying to change any of the way. So she only stay at home, then she got home sick all of these three reasons make people who immigrant to get homesick and want to go back to their country.
So Mamacita is homesick because she stay home, don’t talk to anyone she don’t accept change in herself. She missing her old hometown plus with she know little of English words so she want to go back. The city she live in also have little people so it make her more lonely she feel bad about the country so she stay home look thought old photograph old song to remember her old environment and hometown.
Parat Ratanachaisuwan 10M, Aug. 29, 2010
Too little thesis statements in the introduction paragraph.
ตอบลบShould mind more in grammar rules like plural and singular nouns
and verbs since you mixed them up. However, this is a fine first
essay. Nice one DuDe!!
This is a good essay, but think you need to focus more on your thesis and the reasons supporting it.
ตอบลบI agree with Nuey and Willy but nice one !
ตอบลบI like it ^^ ~
Nice
ตอบลบi think you better care more about your thesis statement